The Tale of Despereaux: Being the Story of a Mouse, a Princess, Some Soup and a Spool of Thread
by
Kate DiCamillo won the Newbury Medal in
2004. Four years later it was made into a
cartoon film.
A year after that, I finally got around to reading it. I don't have a cohesive critique right now, but here are my first thoughts and considerations.
1) Part of the joy of a good children's story (or any fiction, for that matter) is that it communicates something true about life and humanity without spelling it out. The graceful writer will help us see what we couldn't see before
through the narrative. J. M. Barrie, for example, has his heroine Wendy choose to grow up and have children, and yet still be joyful and happy--and thus shows us that we all must grow up someday, and we might as well do it with joy.
Ms. DiCamillo has none of this grace in her narrative. First of all, the narrator is incredibly intrusive and has, to my mind, a condescending tone. The narrator is constantly addressing the reader--which can be a charming way to make the story immediately present to the reader. In her hands it is at best clumsy and at worse demeaning.
Too often the presence of a narrator is a crutch for failure to develop characters and plot. Let us take, for example, the villain, Chiaroscuro. He is a rat who loves the light and thinks it is beautiful. When we first meet him, it is obvious that he is a much better rat than the other rats, and he loves the light (so that's good, right?). Well, he goes up into the castle one day, and then falls into a bowl of soup, and the queen dies of fright. As he slinks back to the dungeon, he looks back at the light and beautiful princess, who is giving him a look of utter hatred.
We already kind-of like Roscuro (as he is called sometimes), and when he scares the queen it seems more like an accident that anything else, so we're distraught for him. But is his innocence rewarded by our dear author? No--she needs him as a villain, so Roscuro decides he will get revenge on the princess.
Revenge for what? He (yes, accidentally) killed the queen, and he wants revenge on the Princess because she's mad at him. What? Well, our author explains, his heart was broken, and then it mended again, but it mended wrongly, so his mended heart sets him on his evil course of action. The entire plot, then, rides on an unclear explanation of character inserted in by the author to make her story fit.
2) I don't want to be nitpicky--I've laid a pretty heavy complaint at Ms. DiCamillo's door--but I also am bothered by her names. She calls Chiaroscuro that because he is, indeed, both of the dark and of the light, and that make sense. Does this mean the other rats must have Italian artistic names as well? The really evil rat is named Botticelli. Botticelli! I fully admit, I first learned of 4 famous renaissance artists from
TMNT--but they were heroes, not villains!
3) The narrative is badly structured. There are four major characters, each of the first books is concerned with one of them. But the only one of these characters that is really appealing is Desperaux--it's true I do love him--and we have to wait 100+ pages to get back to his story.
All that being said, I don't think there is anything really harmful in the book. When the plot finally got going, it was a good one. The problems are primarily structural, and those problems would naturally be solved in the book-to-screen process. I expect to enjoy the film much more (I have yet to see it).